Hey Guys! I drew these pictures and I want feedback, so I can do better next time. Don't be afraid to say something critical. ;) That's the whole point.
You could add a background to the horse drawing. I don't know what to comment since I really don't know much of art. The angles in the last drawing could be better.
Mom: Did the dogs sleep in the play house with you all night long? Summer: Yes Jennie: They didn't pee all night long Summer: Of coarse not nobody can pee all night long.
Sarah slaps my bum and I say "Hey thats only for looks not touch!"
Sarah is in the middle of a huge project and while running to the bathroom she says "Why do I have these bodily functions!"
Jennie: can I pee? Emily: No.
Jennie: This sad is song.
Wendy: I used to be a walker! :) Summer: WELL YOU'RE NOT NOW SO YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO DEAL WITH IT!!!!!
Emily: What are you going to do with your life?
Jennie: Make money buy shoes and eat ice cream.
David: YOU'RE a pancake!
Zak; d'you wanna see me dance?
Mom; I'm gonna buy grandma flavored water. Zak; grandma-flavored water? how do they make that, squeeze the grandmas out??
Zak; you're too skinny. its gross. Emily; you're too fat. you're gross. Zak; whatever. Real men have stretch marks.
Mom- Ants in the dishwasher; happy thought
do you think you can hold down the fart while i'm gone?(mom)
'you are creepy' (Summer) 'no, i'm just logical'(Jenny)
i don't know if i should bring my bike, i bruised it last week. (mom)
toothepick! toothepick! throw it away(rebekah)
you guys can have your Bart time but when i get back i want my Bart time(aleah)
'i feel like the teeth are being jerked out of my mouth' 'thats good isn't it?'
love is odorless, tasteless, disolves instantly in liquid and is among the more deadly poisons known to man . . . i spent the last 26 years building up an imunity to falling in love(Aleah)
they tore down my soggy serial place and built something else. i only have a dry cerial place or a milk and cereal place(Summer)
go away! we're not on the market for decomposition(Aleah)
if you just try for your final life!(Summer)
did you hear that? i didn't know that could pop!
i made this out of pure nature(jenny)
emily, sometimes i think your'e a magical wizard thats kind and good(summer)
' i could really go for a' 'a pee?' 'no, i would never say that'
i never stepped in my own poo! it just got there!(summer)
Aleah, you're wierd
tom, have you seen any rocks today? i haven't see a single one!(grandma)
2 comments:
great job! I like the second and third ones the best. You are so talented!
You could add a background to the horse drawing. I don't know what to comment since I really don't know much of art. The angles in the last drawing could be better.
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